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The Priestess and the Warrior - Sangheili Rampant

 
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 9:31 am    Post subject: The Priestess and the Warrior - Sangheili Rampant Reply with quote

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Posted by Jillybean (jillybean@bungie.org)
13 August 2008, 3:32 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Jillybean0813081532061.html
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 4:51 pm    Post subject: I Reply with quote

I for one love this Very Happy

I've only read the first chapter for now because I had to go, but What I read was great I'm gonna read the rest now, but now I love it.
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 2:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yes, yes, very good Jilly.

I did notice a couple of small punctuations errors; nothing too bad.

Story was rock solid and I was totally engaged. My only complaint is that I am having a hard time figuring out whose who. Perhaps it is because of my forgetting much of the story.

Looking forward to more regular updates.
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