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The Priestess and the Warrior - Sangheili Rampant
Posted by Jillybean (jillybean@bungie.org)
13 August 2008, 3:32 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Jillybean0813081532061.html

uberste · Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 4:51 pm Post subject: I

I for one love this Very Happy

I've only read the first chapter for now because I had to go, but What I read was great I'm gonna read the rest now, but now I love it.
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thedarkfire · Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2008 2:34 pm Post subject:

Yes, yes, very good Jilly.

I did notice a couple of small punctuations errors; nothing too bad.

Story was rock solid and I was totally engaged. My only complaint is that I am having a hard time figuring out whose who. Perhaps it is because of my forgetting much of the story.

Looking forward to more regular updates.