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hboff Site Admin
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Spartan006 Member

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Posted: Fri Jul 25, 2008 5:10 pm Post subject: |
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That was awesome, Kr, I had a wonderful time reading it. You portrayed the Spartan perfectly. You could make a series out of this if you wanted.  _________________ Randomly invading your fanfiction since 2006. |
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Andres Member
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| Great work, kr. I really liked what you did with the dialogue. And a series could be created out of this. |
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kr1 IRC Channel Operator

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Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 10:11 am Post subject: |
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Thanks for the comments, I'm glad you liked it. This is kind of a series, but more a series of connected shorts with similar themes. I'm not sure how connected they'll be in the future, especially because I've been jumping around in the timeline. The next one I do will probably be for James, near the start of the war, rather than near the end like this one was intended.
And thanks to Azathoth and Andres for proofreading and editing. This came out much better thanks to you guys. _________________
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