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hboff Site Admin
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kr1 IRC Channel Operator

Joined: 27 Feb 2007 Posts: 435 Location: UNSC Frigate September
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Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 11:10 am Post subject: |
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This is getting more and more interesting, and you seem to be doing a realy good job tying together the terminals. Looking forward to seeing where you go with the Contender, and how the Suppressor does without his weapons. A clearer image of him is starting to develop in my head, too. I like how you don't outright describe his appearance, but lead us along with scraps of description.
This was short, though. That's my only complaint. Looking forward to the next one.  _________________
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Joined: 17 Mar 2006 Posts: 366 Location: On the worst internet ever...for real.
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Posted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 6:39 pm Post subject: |
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Having not read the previous two chapters I really don't know what's going here, but you've got me hooked now. Even without knowing what's going on I enjoyed this one. The characters are nicely described and the chapter flowed well. _________________ Randomly invading your fanfiction since 2006. |
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