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Attack on Installation 06, part 8

 
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 18, 2008 11:31 am    Post subject: Attack on Installation 06, part 8 Reply with quote

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Attack on Installation 06, part 8
Posted by Jake Trommer (wedgefan@comcast.net)
15 July 2008, 4:29 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Jake_Trommer0715081629511.html
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 12:55 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

AN: Yep. I actually killed off my main character. I felt that Kline was a bit too much of a Gary Stu (despite not being based on me) to continue living, so that's it for him.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 2:55 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Gah! Why would you put that in the comments? I hadn't read the previous chapters, but come on... Razz Comments in the Fick pick, and congrats.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 12:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, then, kr, I'd like to view that revelation as incentive to the read the previous chapters so it'll have more emotional impact. Razz
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 8:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Pretty good Jake. There was a lot of scene changing, but you seem to have done okay with the transition. I haven't read your previous chapters yet, but I'll try to get around to it.
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