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Attack on Installation 06, part 8
Posted by Jake Trommer (wedgefan@comcast.net)
15 July 2008, 4:29 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Jake_Trommer0715081629511.html

Jake Trommer · Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 12:55 am Post subject:

AN: Yep. I actually killed off my main character. I felt that Kline was a bit too much of a Gary Stu (despite not being based on me) to continue living, so that's it for him.
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kr1 · Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 2:55 am Post subject:

Gah! Why would you put that in the comments? I hadn't read the previous chapters, but come on... Razz

Comments in the Fick pick, and congrats.
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Jake Trommer · Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 12:41 pm Post subject:

Well, then, kr, I'd like to view that revelation as incentive to the read the previous chapters so it'll have more emotional impact. Razz

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Spartan006 · Posted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 8:18 pm Post subject:

Pretty good Jake. There was a lot of scene changing, but you seem to have done okay with the transition. I haven't read your previous chapters yet, but I'll try to get around to it.
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