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Ghosts of Erebus (part three): Beautiful, Silent Madness

 
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 30, 2004 2:58 am    Post subject: Ghosts of Erebus (part three): Beautiful, Silent Madness Reply with quote

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Ghosts of Erebus (part three): Beautiful, Silent Madness
Posted by Chuckles
27 November 2004, 8:28 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=chuckles.1127040828455.html
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 30, 2004 11:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sorry this one was so long in coming. Halo2 took up a lot of my writing time. Hope you like it.

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 30, 2004 11:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Loaded to the brim with all the great stuff! Chuckles, I loved that beginning - it took me by surprise completely!

- Dave.
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 1:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

The beginning was awesome, as for the ending. Its leaving me for more.

Can't wait for the next part Chuckles. Excellent series.
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 02, 2004 2:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks guys. It should just about write itself from here on in, but that last one took a bit.

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 02, 2004 2:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Chuckles, since your stories have made the "Fridge Door of Fame" so many times, I'm going to be very hard pressed to keep up. You've got more stories than I have fridge magnets!

Too bad I can't use tape, because the tape will take off the fridge's finish So for now, I'll have to keep everything on electronic archive at HFS.

- Dave.
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 02, 2004 7:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The flow was interesting beacuse of all those transitions, but it was easy to follow.
Also, you didn't include many enviromental/setting details. But, it wasn't something you seemed to need focus on. Still, it would have been a nice inclusion.

I loved that ending. Set it up for some great action or whatever you have planned. You kept a good emotional feel in there, too. When you said he felt something was off, I could almost feel my stomach turn.

Overall, excellent stuff. I should have read this earlier this week. But, not on to all the rest.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 8:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks MC. There was some danger of the pace dragging while my main characters were on the ship, so I kept my scenes short. I went back and forth with the idea of using more details on the Cerberus. I haven't had my Spartans on large ships before, so I am going to have to improve my knowledge of them. I spent a good deal of time in both of Nylund's Halo novels before writing this chapter. I didn't use much detail, but I wanted to be sure what I used was accurate.

Thanks for reading.

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 10:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Chuckles,
I still get "Silence is Madness" roaring thru my head every time I see the title of this one. I'm sure the NEXT segment will fit the tempo of that song nicely.

Itchy to see what will happen next!
~Lex
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 06, 2004 10:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Lex!

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I still get "Silence is Madness" roaring thru my head every time I see the title of this one.


For those of you who don't know what he is talking about (which is probably all of you) Silence is Madness is an awesome song from our favorite group, Bride. Yeah, that song would fit nicely with this fic.

Thanks for the post Lex.

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