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UNSC Trooper
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How come no one has commented on this?
Jinny, you're making real progress with this series. I mean ... Hitler? And I loved the way you portrayed him. I've tried it myself in one of my fanfics.
And, Jinny, I'm sorry I haven't read the other chapters from your previous What If Tales, but are the Germans actually allies with the Covenant?
Oh and I've seen some pretty nasty word confusions, like "there" and "they're", and some other mis-conjugated words similar to the previous chapter. You have to work on that man, cause it puts a great story like this in a bad position grammar wise.
Good job, 9/10! Hope this gets the Fic Pick.  |
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SeverianofUrth
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I'm beginning to think that maybe, we should allow anonymous comments that people can use to review a story without registering to the website. If that's even possible.
Anyways, I love alternate history novels, and this story just cracks me up. I loved reading it. |
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Jin1
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| UNSC Trooper wrote: | How come no one has commented on this?
Jinny, you're making real progress with this series. I mean ... Hitler? And I loved the way you portrayed him. I've tried it myself in one of my fanfics.
And, Jinny, I'm sorry I haven't read the other chapters from your previous What If Tales, but are the Germans actually allies with the Covenant?
Oh and I've seen some pretty nasty word confusions, like "there" and "they're", and some other mis-conjugated words similar to the previous chapter. You have to work on that man, cause it puts a great story like this in a bad position grammar wise.
Good job, 9/10! Hope this gets the Fic Pick. |
Thanks, and I know that my grammar... Sucks in all intensive purposes. I'm trying to do something about that, rereading my story I always skip through and miss things...
Also, the Germans aren't with the Covenant. I doubt Hitler would like that...
| SeverianofUrth wrote: | I'm beginning to think that maybe, we should allow anonymous comments that people can use to review a story without registering to the website. If that's even possible.
Anyways, I love alternate history novels, and this story just cracks me up. I loved reading it. |
Well, it used to be that you posted directly onto the Halo.Bungie.Org fiction page but... Yeah they got rid of that for this.
And thanks for the support. At least I know a few people are enjoying my fic.
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uberste
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| Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2008 7:16 pm Post subject: :> |
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I really like the what if tales.
I think they're amazinig.
the way you portrayed an interrupted ww2 fighting the covenant instead.
I really enjoyed this
keep it up.
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