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Not Exactly Human Ch. 4: Rite of Passage

 
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 5:18 pm    Post subject: Not Exactly Human Ch. 4: Rite of Passage Reply with quote
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Not Exactly Human Ch. 4: Rite of Passage
Posted by QuantumSheep (jasnash@optusnet.com.au)
12 June 2008, 3:29 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=QuantumSheep0612080329531.html
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 11:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
I'm going to recommend that you cut this monster down to something more readable. It looks good, but not many people have the time or patience to slog through a 20,000 word monstrosity, and isn't getting people to read your stuff the whole point of posting fanfiction online?
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