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Jin1
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 10, 2008 12:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

CoLd BlooDed wrote:
Oh my god, you $%*%!ng hentai geek.

Seriously, who the hell thinks of writing anything remotely close to a topic like this? Keep it in your pants, ya loser.


Ain't that the truth.

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Lord Beleth wrote:
You can tell by the title that it was going to be a sick and perverted one. Think about it, Fap-Fap. That alone isn't appropriate.


Or, despite what this author may think, even funny.

But I don't blame Wu, he's got all of HBOFF to run. Smile


Yeah, but some of the stuff you can spot from a mile away as "Something isn't right about this."
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 18, 2013 9:10 am    Post subject: I always believe that what people write reflect themselves.. Reply with quote

....because those ideas in writings came from their minds. Seems like the person behind this writing was experiencing a sexual tension and made a fan fiction to channel it. Well, though it seems that everybody's seen this in pretty much negative light, I hope this person feels better after having his work accepted. Wink

Honestly I think this person has some talent in writing. However, though I'm not part of the feminist community, I must say that the way this person portrays women is pretty rude, and I sense some sexual violence potential in terms of relationships. Anyway, nice try on "Fap-fap the Grunt"
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 20, 2013 12:01 am    Post subject: Re: I always believe that what people write reflect themselv Reply with quote

TheObserver wrote:
Honestly I think this person has some talent in writing.


whoever he (or she) is, I concur with this sentiment because they seem to have, at least, mastered the art of chaining letters and syllables together to make words.

TheObserver wrote:
However, though I'm not part of the feminist community, I must say that the way this person portrays women is pretty rude, and I sense some sexual violence potential in terms of relationships. Anyway, nice try on "Fap-fap the Grunt"


To me it is clear this was intended to be a rather poor parody, and it's not even any bloody good at that.

Rape is not funny. Rape is never funny.

I honestly have less of a problem with genuine erotic/slash/furry fiction. In even the worst erotic fanfic, the author is still genuinely thinking "I love this fictional universe so much I'm going to take the creative output into my own hands."

On the other hand, this... thing. This is clearly not even intended to be proper pornographic fan fiction, just a pitifully weak attempt to say to the world, "look how funny and clever and edgy I am." It trivialises rape. It is grossly puerile.

I can only hope that the person who wrote this has matured significantly in the five years since it was posted. If not... well. Non-specific deities help you.

(Also. Observer. I have no clue in hell how you stumbled across this nearly five years after it was first posted. You're not secretly the author, are you?)
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 11:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow, talk about necroposting, TheObserver.

At least I can lock this on some excellent points that eb4642 made.

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