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PostPosted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 3:55 pm    Post subject: Enigmatic Reply with quote

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Posted by Spartan 006 (minorchief@yahoo.com)
2 June 2008, 4:29 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Spartan_0060602080429511.html
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 4:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nicely done. I found this story to be very interesting and entertaining, although there were about one or two problems. One was about Jean, if there was a Flood inside her. I'm pretty sure that the doctors would have learned of it, even without x-rays.

Anyways, you did a good job. Kudos.
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 6:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Certainly reminds me of Alien(s) if anything. Wink
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 08, 2008 1:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks guys, actually I based this off of a true story. I was wanting to work mainly on improving in my dialogue, seeing as I think dialogue is my strongest area. I'd been wanting to do this story for quite some time, but I didn't know exactly what I wanted to do. If anyone wants some info on the story this was based off of just let me know, and please, if anyone has any advice that would better my writing ability, leave a comment.
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 08, 2008 4:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I would like to know the story it is based off of.

And just take your time and plan everything out. Proof read your work several times before submitting and have someone else look over it as well. Also ask yourself questions, like, "does this part make sense?"
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