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Longsword R: Desperation, Part Three

 
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 12:32 pm    Post subject: Longsword R: Desperation, Part Three Reply with quote

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Longsword R: Desperation, Part Three
Posted by Sterfrye36 (Sterfrye36@yahoo.com)
27 July 2004, 1:57 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=sterfrye36.0727040157115.html
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 2:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This series is definately one of my faves on the site and this part was no exception. One question though; Wouldn't that Covenant ship have been utterly obliterated since it was right next to the blast? Confused
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 2:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yea, good point Opening.

Other than that, it was great. Be interesting to see what happewns in the next few parts.

9.8/10
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 2:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks, guys. As for not being destroyed...Most of the explosion was directed out of the hole and to the opposite side of the IT, which kept the flagship's stronger shields from completely failing.

I think...

And I'm working on the next part, which will be...odd...in a good way, I mean.
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 10:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sweet.

That's all I gotta say.

Sweet.
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 11:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks, Nick.
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 31, 2004 7:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very, very nice.

Doing the battle from two viewpoints must be hard, but you make it look easy.

Great job.

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 31, 2004 10:37 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

yea wasn't it hard for u to make telll both side, great series
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 31, 2004 10:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks, Chuckles, WE. Comments are always welcome. And the battle thing is kind of hard. The only really hard thing about the battles is remembering what each side thinks of the other's tactics, and how they would respond.
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 02, 2004 2:10 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

i've said it, and i'll say it again, this is the best Halo space-battle fanfic out there. heck, one of the best space battles stories, period.
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 04, 2004 9:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

When did you say that?
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