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eyes of an ODST: First battle of earth

 
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PostPosted: Fri May 02, 2008 2:19 pm    Post subject: eyes of an ODST: First battle of earth Reply with quote
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eyes of an ODST: First battle of earth
Posted by Spencer Gregoire (spencergregoire@sbcglobal.net)
28 April 2008, 9:42 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Spencer_Greg0428082142571.html
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PostPosted: Fri May 02, 2008 4:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
You depicted the ODSTs well, but the Sergeant is problematic. The review is here: http://hboff.bungie.org/viewtopic.php?p=59769
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