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PostPosted: Fri Apr 25, 2008 10:33 am    Post subject: The forming of the covenant Reply with quote

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The forming of the covenant
Posted by Alex 117 (Alex_117)
23 April 2008, 11:04 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Alex_1170423081104081.html
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 30, 2008 7:21 pm    Post subject: Wow Reply with quote

im forced to ask, were you serious when you wrote this? there was poor punctuation, the story appeared rushed, you had way too many words in all caps which is a huge No-No. next time you post a story it would be a good idea to read it over, or have someone read it over.
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PostPosted: Wed Apr 30, 2008 7:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

GTFO troll.

If you were serious, I pity you.
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PostPosted: Thu May 01, 2008 11:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I really hope you wrote this badly on purpose, there is a reason that English is taught in schools. If this is seriously the best you can do (and I doubt it) tell us and we'll try our best to help you. If you did this to be funny, well, you're not.
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