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PostPosted: Fri Apr 11, 2008 2:07 pm    Post subject: Fire in the Darkness Reply with quote

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Fire in the Darkness
Posted by Kaiyo No Hime (hitokiri_hime@yahoo.com)
5 April 2008, 1:08 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Kaiyo_No_Him0405080108101.html
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 2:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This was amazing. Very well done. Excellent writing. A little confusing, but that's the disturbing part of it. I'm trying to remember if I've seen you post anything here before, but I don't think you have, which makes this even more awesome in some ways. It's rare that we get a new author with as much talent as you have.
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 18, 2008 1:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

That was awesome, a little confusing like Az said, but it was still cool. I like how you had dialogue breaking up the sections. I'm going to keep an eye out for more from you. 9/10
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