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Amethyst part 3 Lumination

 
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 12:44 pm    Post subject: Amethyst part 3 Lumination Reply with quote

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Amethyst part 3 Lumination
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4 April 2008, 1:40 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=kr1426160404080140521.html
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 1:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You fixed all of the problems I pointed out to you, except for Sarge. That's about it. Very Happy Flowed good, jelled good, so that makes the chapter good. Great job, kr142616
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 5:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks, for the comment and the edit. I've been sitting on this for a while, and I just wanted to get it over with so I can move to the next chapter. I'll hopefully be writing more regularly now that this is finished.
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