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PostPosted: Fri Feb 22, 2008 8:26 pm    Post subject: Interlude Reply with quote

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Posted by Xen Wolfe (xendarkwolfe@gmail.com)
21 February 2008, 1:37 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Xen_Wolfe0221080137391.html
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 2:03 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

This is a pretty good piece you've got here, Xen Wolfe. I liked the beginning alot. Your description was excellent, I could see exactly what you were trying to portray. The battle bit seemed a little clunky to me, but it was still nice. In all, a very nice read. 8/10
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