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PostPosted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 1:19 pm    Post subject: Wake Me Chap 2 Reply with quote
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Wake Me Chap 2
Posted by alimination602 (alimination602@gmail.com)
29 December 2007, 2:50 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=alimination61229071450411.html
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 8:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Same problem as your other one: dont jumble yer dialog one right after the other. Start a new paragraph whenever you begin dialog.
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