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PostPosted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 12:41 pm    Post subject: 12 Days of HBO ( a parody ) Reply with quote

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12 Days of HBO ( a parody )
Posted by Spartan 006 (minorchief@yahoo.com)
19 December 2007, 4:58 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Spartan_0061219070458211.html
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 5:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good job, 006. I haven't got a soundtrack to this song, but it sure does look pretty good, and it reads pretty well. Of course, there's no rhyming scheme, and that seems to mess things up quite a bit. That's my only problem with it.

It's a pity TFMCBG (Tales From MC's Bar & Grill) is going to be discontinued and renamed. But thanks for the honourable mention.
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 22, 2007 12:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks Dave. Actually, the real song doesn't rhyme either so I didn't bother going through and trying to make it rhyme for this. Hope you can find the song, it's The 12 Days of Christmas.

Also, I forgot to put in an author's note, but just because you are in this ( or not in this ) doesn't mean anything, you just fit the part. Thank You.
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 22, 2007 3:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Haha, dude this was beast. Being a music artist myself, I think everything was perfect. The flow of the lyrics to the tune of the song was flawlessly executed, and I think you did a great job man.
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 22, 2007 5:12 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Spartan006 wrote:
Thanks Dave. Actually, the real song doesn't rhyme either so I didn't bother going through and trying to make it rhyme for this. Hope you can find the song, it's The 12 Days of Christmas.

Also, I forgot to put in an author's note, but just because you are in this ( or not in this ) doesn't mean anything, you just fit the part. Thank You.


On the first day of Christmas, my true love gave to me,
A partridge in a pear tree.


The 'ee' sounds on 'me' and 'tree' rhyme in the first verse, although I guess that's really nothing in the end. Just razzin' ya, pal. Still great. I'll try going through to see if all the syllables match up later, but I'm pretty sure that's up to you in the end.

I wish I had more time to record a metal version of this... of course, with a three-minute guitar solo of sheer doom. I've been busy as stink, unfortunately.
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 22, 2007 5:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Cute, man, cute. There's not really a whole lot to add to this, but I think it seems appropriate:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2Fe11OlMiz8

Enjoy!
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