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A Series of Poems: Lamentation

 
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 21, 2007 12:40 pm    Post subject: A Series of Poems: Lamentation Reply with quote

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A Series of Poems: Lamentation
Posted by (ENS) Rabid_Gallagher (rabid_masterchief@hotmail.com)
15 December 2007, 9:57 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=ENS_Rabid_Ga1215072157061.html
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 8:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Pretty nice, Gallagher. You don't see many poems like this, which may be the reason I had trouble finding the meter of it. The way you ended left right on the edge of my seat, nicely done. It gets, 10/10
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 23, 2007 8:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Not. One. Bit.

Reminds me of the rampant ramblings of Durandal back in the day of Marathon, as well as why I liked that game so much. Excellent poem, if a little awkward to read aloud.
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