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They Call Me Mr. Spark

 
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2004 3:18 pm    Post subject: They Call Me Mr. Spark Reply with quote
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They Call Me Mr. Spark
Posted by 343_GuiltySpark (the_alter_ego@hotmail.com)
18 November 2004, 3:47 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=343_guiltysp.1118040347551.html
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2004 3:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Ah, pretty good.

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2004 4:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
It was okay, but I don't think that you constructed it very well. It looked like it was hastily written.
It didn't sound like 343GS either. So, good job, better luck next time.
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 12:50 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Way to make fun of 343! I give it a ten out of ten! But seriously, It does seem like you were trying to get it done as fast as possile. Next time just take it slow. Final grade: 8/10.
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 5:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Clever in places and well written. Could have been longer, but I always say that about poems.

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