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PostPosted: Sun Nov 25, 2007 5:17 pm    Post subject: ....before you can walk Reply with quote

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....before you can walk
Posted by spook (sp00k@twcny.rr.com)
16 November 2007, 5:25 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=spook1116071725481.html
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 27, 2007 3:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

honorable mention in my Fic Pick of the Week. Check it out in the Writer's Guild.
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 28, 2007 5:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

That was pretty good. I haven't been on in a long time and it seems like there are still people posting without using code. Please read about the code and use it. Not only that but pressing the enter key a couple of times between paragraphs will help with that giant block of text. Anyway many small things can bring a good story down. Try and fix that.

As always proof read well and have a buddy proof for you. Anyway keep practicing you will get there.
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