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Halo: Stealth Combat Evolved: Part 1-Chapter 1

 
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 12:31 pm    Post subject: Halo: Stealth Combat Evolved: Part 1-Chapter 1 Reply with quote

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Halo: Stealth Combat Evolved: Part 1-Chapter 1
Posted by Mind_Affecting_Parasite
26 July 2004, 1:05 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=mind_affecti.0726040105132.html
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 2:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great job, MAP. I like the story even more already.

9.9/10
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 3:31 pm    Post subject: i like the story Reply with quote

That was a pretty good story. The plot is coming along well. It's interesting that you chose splinter cell to adjust the story every now and then. its one of my favorite games on xbox right now.
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 3:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Action doesn't matter.

It's the quality that makes it sing.


As for the action - to me, it's only secondary. What really counts is the story's meaning and if so, philosophical values.

The quality of the writing is IMPECCABLE.

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 5:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I agree, action shouldn't be your primary story element. If a story is good, then it won't matter if there's action in it. And this story was good, very good. I like Splinter Cell and I like Halo.
And since this was only Chap 1, I can only wait to see where you take your plot.
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 6:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very nice. The story is good, and it's suprisingly well written. Keep up the good work.
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 7:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

wow very good, i suck at Splinter Cell PT, but im very interested(u write just like tom clancy lol)[/img]
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 31, 2004 10:12 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

this story rocks,by the way can u help me in Splinter Cell Pt
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 04, 2004 3:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

It feels so good to be back in the HBO chain. MAP, I found this story to rock just as much as your other ones. Watch some grammar and you'll keep tearin' some good ones on HBO. By the way you suck. Twisted Evil Laughing you know im kiddin'
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