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Sgt. Slacker
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Great job, MAP. I like the story even more already.
9.9/10 |
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Black Titan
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| Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 3:31 pm Post subject: i like the story |
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| That was a pretty good story. The plot is coming along well. It's interesting that you chose splinter cell to adjust the story every now and then. its one of my favorite games on xbox right now. |
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SYSTEM
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Action doesn't matter.
It's the quality that makes it sing.
As for the action - to me, it's only secondary. What really counts is the story's meaning and if so, philosophical values.
The quality of the writing is IMPECCABLE.
- Dave.
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MC's Cousin
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I agree, action shouldn't be your primary story element. If a story is good, then it won't matter if there's action in it. And this story was good, very good. I like Splinter Cell and I like Halo.
And since this was only Chap 1, I can only wait to see where you take your plot.
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funkmon
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| Posted: Fri Jul 30, 2004 6:16 pm Post subject: |
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| Very nice. The story is good, and it's suprisingly well written. Keep up the good work. |
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HoZ
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| wow very good, i suck at Splinter Cell PT, but im very interested(u write just like tom clancy lol)[/img] |
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White elite
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| Posted: Sat Jul 31, 2004 10:12 am Post subject: |
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| this story rocks,by the way can u help me in Splinter Cell Pt |
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Jenkins
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It feels so good to be back in the HBO chain. MAP, I found this story to rock just as much as your other ones. Watch some grammar and you'll keep tearin' some good ones on HBO. By the way you suck.   you know im kiddin' |
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