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UNSC Chronicles: Soldier Girl, Book 1, Chapter 1

 
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 2:26 pm    Post subject: UNSC Chronicles: Soldier Girl, Book 1, Chapter 1 Reply with quote

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UNSC Chronicles: Soldier Girl, Book 1, Chapter 1
Posted by Adam Stark (Xvash2@sbcglobal.net)
7 November 2007, 4:09 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Adam_Stark1107070409181.html
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 6:14 pm    Post subject: Good plot... Reply with quote

Great plot idea. I'm very intrigued by this Lieutenant Dan mentality being placed on a young girl... Hopefully you'll take this story far across the galaxy with the kind of scope Halo 3 has given us. A friend and I played through Campaign again last night, and it gets better each time. For such a personal sort of story, I'd say you've done this expertly. Most Halo stories about a single protagonist with a very human atmosphere are pretty...well, I won't say anything undeserved. You've done a good job telling this story so far. If you find time, read my series "Storms of Grevahdi." It's the story of a battle taking place on the world in the multiplayer map "Sandtrap" in H3. All my characters are original, though I may include the Arbiter as a cameo late in the series. I will probably have six parts, since that is a nice even number and it worked for Star Wars (sort of--I thought so, anyway). Good luck with your story...
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 7:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for the compliments. I'm aiming for 3 "books" in this story, each being 15-20 chapters. I've got maybe 6 done and over 3,000 words. I gotta speed up.
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 8:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Xvash2 wrote:
Thanks for the compliments. I'm aiming for 3 "books" in this story, each being 15-20 chapters. I've got maybe 6 done and over 3,000 words. I gotta speed up.


I wouldn't call that a Chapter even a prologue. Where is the length? Your "15-20 chapters" would be nearly the equivalent of just two of my chapters and I plan to do upwards of sixty.
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