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PostPosted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 2:41 pm    Post subject: a love built on strengh and honor trilogy Reply with quote

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Posted by anthony (anthonyisnumberone@hotmail.com)
28 October 2007, 6:37 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=anthony1028071837081.html
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 2:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow... Look man, no offence, but there were ALOT of spelling/grammar mistakes...

On top of that the whole "Miranda please go out with me" thing didnt work well for me.
The Arbiter is cool enough to get his own chicks-he doesnt need to "try" and steal mine...
Oh, and I was a bit grossed out towards the end...
What would Captain Keyes say if he was there?
*ahem*
"Arbiter! WTF MAN? THIS HAPPENED 8 MONTHS AGO?! IM GOING TO BE A GRANDFATHER!"
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 8:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

In before the lock!
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 8:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

In before the lock!
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 02, 2007 8:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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