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PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 2:32 pm    Post subject: What If Tales: Fly Boys Reply with quote

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What If Tales: Fly Boys
Posted by Jin1 (jermevans1990@gmail.com)
3 August 2007, 1:51 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Jin10803071351231.html
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 2:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This story is a bit rushed... So I understand if there is many errors with it.
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 03, 2007 11:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good work, Jin. As you said there were some GPS errors, but there weren't that many. I liked this one and how you described the air battle. P-51 Mustang! Awesome! 7/10
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 5:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yep, there were some errors, but not enough to become distracting.

Wow, I really like the imagination put into this one. WWII era+Halo=One hell of a ride.
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 3:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well there should be one up tomorrow but it may not be in the same view as World War II... A little bit later.
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