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In Good Company: Chapter 2: The Fine Country

 
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 08, 2007 3:33 pm    Post subject: In Good Company: Chapter 2: The Fine Country Reply with quote

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In Good Company: Chapter 2: The Fine Country
Posted by Arthur Wellesley (arthur_wellesly@hotmail.com)
8 June 2007, 2:29 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Arthur_Welle0608070229371.html
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 09, 2007 10:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Beautiful, exquisite in fact. You've certainly come a long way from dodgy allegories. I seem to remember in the first chapter the female director being quite reminiscent of a particular character in a particular series.

Though espionage is not really my favourite flavour of fiction, it was still very tasty.

Language was excellent throughout, pacing first class and above all else, a remarkably enjoyable read. To say I feel disgusted and wretched with myself compared to your brilliance is an understatement. I need a shower.

Bastard, you've interrupted my own fiction now. I'll have word flows going through my head while I'm trying to sculpt my own work. Never a good thing in my book.

17 views and nobody's going to comment? What is the matter with this community. This was great, deserves more kudos for such erudite charm.
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 09, 2007 1:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

How did I not notice this at first glance? Hmm. Well, Art, this was a great piece of work. I have a thing for spy stories; ironically, I can't write them for sh*t. I love Kim's character, though, he is indeed a "cynical son of a b*tch". Keep it up.
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 10, 2007 6:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Beautiful, exquisite in fact. You've certainly come a long way from dodgy allegories. I seem to remember in the first chapter the female director being quite reminiscent of a particular character in a particular series.


I`ll make a confession: I don`t even like allegories that much Confused

Anyway, thanks a lot for the very complimentary review. I`m glad I succeeded in what I have planned out for some time now.

And thanks to you, Azathoth. I`m glad you enjoyed it.

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 4:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

another detailed piece of work arthur. I will confess, even though I am a college grad student, I could barely understand half of the words you used to describe glares, feelings, and settings. but, the story worked very well regardless.

one question though: how does this relate to Halo? just exploring espionage within the UNSC?

your writing continues to amaze though, one could only hope to conjure a piece of writing such as this. cheers.
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