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PostPosted: Tue Nov 09, 2004 3:54 pm    Post subject: They are coming Reply with quote

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They are coming
Posted by ZackDark (zackdark@energymail.com)
8 November 2004, 5:13 PM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=zackdark.1108041713031.html
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my head is gone
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 09, 2004 5:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

methinks i'll probably be the only one to post a comment. ( i would be playing halo 2, WOOT, but my xbox is screwed up. i might play halo a few more times though.) anyway it was short. really short. i post limericks but i post 4 usually. try being a little more creative. you have all this emotional buildup that doesn't go anywhere. if something is stupid or whimsical it's ok to be a little short, but this should have been more lengthy.

Adios,
enjoy your halo 2 and if your feeling charitable maybe you could PM if you'd like to give me money. i know everyone is just dying to. or maybe not.
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 09, 2004 11:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow. That was really short. Next time, make them longer, and of better quality. And like my head is gone said, make sure to include more than one.

If you can sing it and it's catchy, then post it.
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 10, 2004 12:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

That was good . . . what there was of it anyway. Waaaaaay too short.

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 11, 2004 12:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Look, I've been rooting through days of this.

This is not a parody. This is a rip-off of Tolkien's creative genius. Please do not do this again.

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 11, 2004 2:37 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Don't know what to say. Kinda sucks.
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 12, 2004 12:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

There was no real material there at all. Yeah, you need to work on that. Also, well, be original, make up some creative terms and well used references.
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 12, 2004 4:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

What an original title. Pure creative genius there.

If you can communicate effectively using the English language, you should be able to come up with a better title.

They are coming, and I am going.

-Walker, long-lost and probably forgotten
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 13, 2004 2:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ah, Greetings again, good Walker. I trust all is well?

I wonder how humanity fares in its little island Earth. I see now that William Golding's "Lord Of the Flies" refers well to our hopeless situation.

Anyhow, I'll cut the flowery talk, again.


I know that newbies come. Newbies with ideas on their minds and enthusiasm in their hands. But Newbies turn to n00bs as they sniff, sneer, and flip over the guidelines, and instead turn to rip off other people's ideas instead of coming up with new material.

Plagarism is a crime.

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 13, 2004 6:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You're not forgotten Walker.
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