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Ghosts of Erebus (part two): Postcards from Hell
Posted by Chuckles
7 November 2004, 10:16 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=chuckles.1107041016452.html

Chuckles · Posted: Wed Nov 10, 2004 12:24 am Post subject:

If you have read my Mission From SATU series, you should know that although Ghosts of Erebus has some of the same characters, it is not meant to "mesh" perfectly with SATU. For instance, the young intelligence officer (David Sagus) mentioned in this chapter was Ackerson's pilot in SATU. Also, some characters may die in this fic (which is supposed to have happened before SATU) who showed up in that fic.

Just so you know.

C.T. Clown

Helljumper · Member Joined: 31 Jul 2004 Posts: 298 Location: Pittsburgh

That was good. i know you're trying to give the background info inorder to jump to the plot of the story, but all the summary is a little boring.

ODST

Solidus Snake · Posted: Thu Nov 11, 2004 2:27 am Post subject:

Nice job. So I guess they're gonna kick the Clowns ass now? Can't wait for next part.

Chuckles · Posted: Thu Nov 11, 2004 4:55 am Post subject:

Thanks guys. Because of Halo2 I probably will not update until sometime next week.

C.T. Clown

Chuckles · Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2004 6:54 am Post subject:

Not too many views or comments on this one. I will continue this story, so I hope those who have read the prologue will also read "Postcards from Hell." I guess the week that they release Halo 2 isn't the best time to continue a series. Can't complain: I've also been playing rather than reading and reviewing.

C.T. Clown

MC's Cousin · Mr. 1337 Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 2142 Location: Here.

Very nice. I saw the connection from Mission from SATU.
Nice the way you set it, too. Gave it a good amount of... mystery to keep me interested. Could have used a sprinkle more detail, but it was alright as it was.
Personally, that explenation didn't bore me at all.

Overall, well done.
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SYSTEM · Posted: Wed Nov 17, 2004 11:45 pm Post subject:

Chuckles, My Hero. I'm going to print this off and read it before I go to bed. Usually a good, satisfying story at bed-time is great for the mind, as well as a cup of tea.

It gives you the most gratifying nightmares possible.

- Dave.

MC's Cousin · Mr. 1337 Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 2142 Location: Here.

I drink tea, too. I like to read at night as well. Well Dave, we aren't as different as I thought. I prefer Chai, myself. Or some good mint. Or whatever else I happen to pick up at the super market.
'Cept, I read stuff like Clancy or Nylund or Dietz or Lewis or whatever.
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Chuckles · Posted: Thu Nov 18, 2004 7:12 am Post subject:

Thanks Dave and MCC. I was afraid that this one might slip by unnoticed. I hope to have part three sometime this weekend.

C.T. Clown

SYSTEM · Posted: Thu Nov 18, 2004 5:17 pm Post subject:

MC's Cousin · Mr. 1337 Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 2142 Location: Here.

[quote="Dave LuckAnd Chuck, this one's too good to slip by - nothing deserves to slip by, NOTHING! And I like the description of the "Desk-puke-brains" - it made me laugh.

- Dave.[/quote]
Even n00b poo (aka-n00b stories), Dave?
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SYSTEM · Posted: Sat Nov 20, 2004 3:01 pm Post subject:

What?!

This is very funny, though.

- Dave.