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Ghosts of Erebus (part two): Postcards from Hell

 
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 09, 2004 3:53 pm    Post subject: Ghosts of Erebus (part two): Postcards from Hell Reply with quote

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Ghosts of Erebus (part two): Postcards from Hell
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7 November 2004, 10:16 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=chuckles.1107041016452.html
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 10, 2004 12:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

If you have read my Mission From SATU series, you should know that although Ghosts of Erebus has some of the same characters, it is not meant to "mesh" perfectly with SATU. For instance, the young intelligence officer (David Sagus) mentioned in this chapter was Ackerson's pilot in SATU. Also, some characters may die in this fic (which is supposed to have happened before SATU) who showed up in that fic.

Just so you know.

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 10, 2004 4:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

That was good. i know you're trying to give the background info inorder to jump to the plot of the story, but all the summary is a little boring.

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 11, 2004 2:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice job. So I guess they're gonna kick the Clowns ass now? Can't wait for next part.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 11, 2004 4:55 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks guys. Because of Halo2 I probably will not update until sometime next week.

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 14, 2004 6:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Not too many views or comments on this one. I will continue this story, so I hope those who have read the prologue will also read "Postcards from Hell." I guess the week that they release Halo 2 isn't the best time to continue a series. Can't complain: I've also been playing rather than reading and reviewing.

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 17, 2004 1:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very nice. I saw the connection from Mission from SATU.
Nice the way you set it, too. Gave it a good amount of... mystery to keep me interested. Could have used a sprinkle more detail, but it was alright as it was.
Personally, that explenation didn't bore me at all.

Overall, well done.
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 17, 2004 11:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Chuckles, My Hero. I'm going to print this off and read it before I go to bed. Usually a good, satisfying story at bed-time is great for the mind, as well as a cup of tea.

It gives you the most gratifying nightmares possible.

- Dave.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 18, 2004 1:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I drink tea, too. I like to read at night as well. Well Dave, we aren't as different as I thought. I prefer Chai, myself. Or some good mint. Or whatever else I happen to pick up at the super market.
'Cept, I read stuff like Clancy or Nylund or Dietz or Lewis or whatever.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 18, 2004 7:12 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks Dave and MCC. I was afraid that this one might slip by unnoticed. I hope to have part three sometime this weekend.

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 18, 2004 5:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

MC's Cousin wrote:
...Chai, myself. Or some good mint...


Well, Echinacea Orange is pretty good for coughs, and Ginseg or other Oriental herbs taste great without suguar or honey. But yes, Mint is great for those days when you feel "Urk - How am I supposed to sleep with those exams tomorrow!" Pretty good, uh-huh.

And about the books, Well, Clancy's Patriot games were kinda funny. Remember how Jack Ryan was about to pull the trigger on that guy with the gun in his mouth? Thrilling. And how Sally kept saying "Peccalins?"

Yes, Ludlum's good - except sometimes he gets a little racist. In fact, usually Terrorists are attributed toward middle eastern and far eastern nations. *Sigh* It's funny, but if a White guy joins Al-Queada, I'm sure he'll be branded as a 'rebel' not a 'terrorist.'



And Chuck, this one's too good to slip by - nothing deserves to slip by, NOTHING! And I like the description of the "Desk-puke-brains" - it made me laugh.

- Dave.
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 19, 2004 1:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="Dave LuckAnd Chuck, this one's too good to slip by - nothing deserves to slip by, NOTHING! And I like the description of the "Desk-puke-brains" - it made me laugh.

- Dave.[/quote]
Even n00b poo (aka-n00b stories), Dave?
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2004 3:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

What?!

This is very funny, though.

- Dave.
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