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Outnumbered: The Iron Maiden

 
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 1:31 pm    Post subject: Outnumbered: The Iron Maiden Reply with quote

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Outnumbered: The Iron Maiden
Posted by Aleks G. (haloaleks1992@hotmail.com)
19 April 2007, 1:36 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Aleks_G.0419070136241.html
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2007 4:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

After MCC commented on my space battle writing ability, i tried it again, tell me what you all think...


It sounds worse than the Blood canyon space battle sometimes, i hope i get some good reviews though
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2007 8:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm not a very good critic of space battles, but I enjoyed this one.
There was one part that just lept out at me though...
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Ensign Trotsky hugged lieutenant Wigmore, he blushed and tried to pry her off, but she kept hugging and thanking him for saving their lives.
I don't know if this would actually happen so someone else can post about that. Overall it was good, 7/10.
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