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PostPosted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 11:41 am    Post subject: Tricks? Part 1 Reply with quote

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Tricks? Part 1
Posted by zhenoob (angelex2@hotmail.com)
18 March 2007, 6:52 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=zhenoob0318070652091.html
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Collins Okonkwo
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 10:49 am    Post subject: How cool Reply with quote

Laughing Believe it or not zhenoob that thing had me laughing my eyes out.
Nothing like a little laughter amidst all the seriousness i've been experiencing around here.

I am more than eager to see the next part. Very Happy
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 24, 2007 2:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice dude! Since this was a comedy I won't rant too much on mistakes... Just watch your sentence structure. I will admit this was really funny and it put a smile on my face. It could have been better however if you had more carefully structured your sentences.

Overall it was good though!
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 6:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

That was great! I loved it! It was really funny!
I'd put the "Laughing" Smiley in, but he just looks... awkward...
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 2:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Eh, I didn't like it that much. I know you were just trying to make a joke out of a few glitches, but I started getting a bit bored reading it.
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 1:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

hi this is me zhenoob. thanks for the positive comments, ill try to do better, but its quite hard to write these kind of things. Confused
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