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This is My Rifle. . .

 
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 5:54 pm    Post subject: This is My Rifle. . . Reply with quote
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This is My Rifle. . .
Posted by Archangel 7 (arch.angel_7@yahoo.com)
2 March 2007, 6:42 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Archangel_70302070642171.html
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 7:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
...holy sh*t dude...
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 12:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Jarhead Smile

I liked this, Arch, it's been a while since I've read something like this.
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 9:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Very nice. I like how the guy gives all his faintly-Zen interludes.
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 08, 2007 1:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
man that was good nice
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 08, 2007 1:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Nice dude! I couldn't help thinking of Full Metal Jacket while reading it. But man i love the originality of this one and I also loved the length. Not too long as to be tedious, but also not too short to cut the reader off prematurely.

Outstanding! I loved it.

Caleb
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 08, 2007 6:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Well, the length is kind of illusionary: the thing is barely over the minimum word count!
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 12:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Excellent Read. kudos.
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 14, 2007 5:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Great form, great writing style. The desperate struggle interspersed with the pontifications of his rifle was a very effective story format. His ponderings of an afterlife in the midst of battle was well done and made all the more potent as you made clear the inevitability of his imminent discovery of the truth. It was all made very relevant and came together very nicely.

Excellent job.

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 15, 2007 6:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
pretty awesome man. i really enjoyed it.
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 10:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
That was totally ausome! and inspiring at the same time.... there might be something to this!!


loved it man.
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