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Complete HAVOK: One Soldiers Escape Part 4
Posted by Aleks G. (haloaleks1992@hotmail.com)
27 February 2007, 1:00 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Aleks_G.0227070100561.html

[Collins Okonkwo]

Hey man, i tell you again, I think you're gonna make a good novelist if you keep at this.

You're a good writer and have a unique way of painting pictures in a readers mind.

Thats the good anyway, i'll make the bads known to you next mail.

and I loved [i]Havoc part two [/i] where your man made that desperate jump into the sea. and i also think sargeant Covie''s an interesting character. one i would watch out for.


You can check out my work, and see what you think.

BOAH4 series posted 28 feb 2007.
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[Archangel_7]

Wow. You're showing real improvement, and I'm becoming interested. Just clean up your GPS, capitalize where needed,