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PostPosted: Fri Jan 19, 2007 1:08 pm    Post subject: invasion 2-the war part 2 Reply with quote

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invasion 2-the war part 2
Posted by paul cooper (lcooper764@aol.com.)
12 January 2007, 9:22 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=paul_cooper0112070922061.html
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 19, 2007 2:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's evident you haven't listened to us at all. No capitals, numbers mixed with letters, grammar errors, punctuations errors, spelling mistakes, lack of detail, story going by too quickly, abrupt switching of viewpoints, "chapters", not taking a new line when the next character is speaking, and no Code.

...I give up.
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 19, 2007 5:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Geez, are you blind?
Skul wrote:
It's evident you haven't listened to us at all. No capitals, numbers mixed with letters, grammar errors, punctuations errors, spelling mistakes, lack of detail, story going by too quickly, abrupt switching of viewpoints, "chapters", not taking a new line when the next character is speaking, and no Code.

...I give up.


I don't blame you. In fact, I bet he didn't even read the last posts.

-HF06
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 2:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I sent this guy an email.

On the other hand, since I'm feeling particularly nasty today, you guys go ahead and say what you like. Within reason of course. Pain is the best teacher.


Kid, you're gonna need to start listening to advice if you expect to get any positive feedback. If you need a little hand I'll be more than happy to put you through a crash course in writing. Of course, if you wanna release sub-par stuff, that's entirely up to you, but at least take it somewhere else.

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 2:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

No.

Just, no.
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 12:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

It could be that he never checks the comments. Lets wait to see if he changes after reading that email. Im willing to give him a fourth chance Wink
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