HBO Fan Fiction

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A Soldier's Story
Posted by Mainevent (mainevent117@gmail.com)
3 November 2004, 3:45 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=mainevent.1103040345407.html

MC's Cousin · Mr. 1337 Joined: 30 Jul 2004 Posts: 2142 Location: Here.

Pretty nice. Had a little emotion in there. Not as much as I would have expected from this type of thing, but still there.
The rhyming scheme was pretty nice, not perfect, but who cares.

Overall, I liked it.
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Solidus Snake · Posted: Thu Nov 11, 2004 3:34 am Post subject:

Didn't have to captalize every letter. But that was pretty good poem.

Mainevent · Posted: Thu Nov 11, 2004 5:12 pm Post subject:

I don't usually capitalize every word, but I felt like doing something different this time.

SYSTEM · Posted: Sat Nov 13, 2004 3:32 pm Post subject:

Well, Main's an established writer - he can bend or break certain rules. Heck, I've manipulated certain rules in certain areas, especially on the songs I write.

- Dave.

Pajari · Member Joined: 28 Sep 2004 Posts: 100 Location: Luna

No matter about the capitalization, that was very good. One of the better poems I've read on these forums.

Mainevent · Posted: Tue Nov 16, 2004 3:48 am Post subject:

Thanks guys, I'm glad you liked it. (Understatement).