HBO Fan Fiction Forum Index HBO Fan Fiction
Forum for HBO Fan Fiction Related Stuff
 
 FAQFAQ   SearchSearch   MemberlistMemberlist   UsergroupsUsergroups   RegisterRegister 
 ProfileProfile   Log in to check your private messagesLog in to check your private messages   Log inLog in 

A Soldier's Story

 
Post new topic   Reply to topic    HBO Fan Fiction Forum Index -> Fan Fiction Comments
View previous topic :: View next topic  
Author Message
hboff
Site Admin


Joined: 25 Jul 2004
Posts: 4356

PostPosted: Tue Nov 09, 2004 3:50 pm    Post subject: A Soldier's Story Reply with quote

This topic is for posting comments to:

A Soldier's Story
Posted by Mainevent (mainevent117@gmail.com)
3 November 2004, 3:45 AM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=mainevent.1103040345407.html
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
MC's Cousin
Mr. 1337


Joined: 30 Jul 2004
Posts: 2142
Location: Here.

PostPosted: Tue Nov 09, 2004 7:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Pretty nice. Had a little emotion in there. Not as much as I would have expected from this type of thing, but still there.
The rhyming scheme was pretty nice, not perfect, but who cares.

Overall, I liked it.
_________________
-MCC
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail AIM Address Yahoo Messenger MSN Messenger
Solidus Snake
Member


Joined: 30 Jul 2004
Posts: 281
Location: A dying Metal Community

PostPosted: Thu Nov 11, 2004 3:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Didn't have to captalize every letter. But that was pretty good poem.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Send e-mail AIM Address Yahoo Messenger MSN Messenger
Mainevent
Member


Joined: 30 Jul 2004
Posts: 796
Location: Mobel, Abalama

PostPosted: Thu Nov 11, 2004 5:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I don't usually capitalize every word, but I felt like doing something different this time.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
SYSTEM
The Hammer


Joined: 30 Jul 2004
Posts: 3744
Location: Tango, Oscar, Charlie

PostPosted: Sat Nov 13, 2004 3:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, Main's an established writer - he can bend or break certain rules. Heck, I've manipulated certain rules in certain areas, especially on the songs I write.

- Dave.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message AIM Address
Pajari
Member


Joined: 28 Sep 2004
Posts: 100
Location: Luna

PostPosted: Sat Nov 13, 2004 3:38 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

No matter about the capitalization, that was very good. One of the better poems I've read on these forums.
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message Visit poster's website
Mainevent
Member


Joined: 30 Jul 2004
Posts: 796
Location: Mobel, Abalama

PostPosted: Tue Nov 16, 2004 3:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks guys, I'm glad you liked it. (Understatement). Arrow
Back to top
View user's profile Send private message
Display posts from previous:   
Post new topic   Reply to topic    HBO Fan Fiction Forum Index -> Fan Fiction Comments All times are GMT
Page 1 of 1

 
Jump to:  
You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot vote in polls in this forum


Powered by phpBB © 2001, 2005 phpBB Group