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PostPosted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 4:11 pm    Post subject: Soldiers & Saints Reply with quote

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Posted by xX0 JACKAL 0Xx (jacaliber@gmail.com)
1 January 2007, 8:44 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=xX0_JACKAL_00101070844361.html
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 9:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You're going to need to follow some conventions of writing--that is, you need to seperate the paragraphs by double-spacing between each paragraph, or by using the indent function (look it up; its on the website).

To tell you the truth, I didn't read the story. The wall of words you created seemed too formidable a challenge. But I did like the sentiments you displayed--you know, about the OPPOSITE to SUPERMAN--and I do look forward to reading your work when you start making them a big more approachable.

As for the 'conventions' of writing, just google some writing tips and read them.
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