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Halo Alliances: Chapter One

 
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 29, 2006 10:58 pm    Post subject: Halo Alliances: Chapter One Reply with quote
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Halo Alliances: Chapter One
Posted by ChibiHalo (ssvaltinson@msn.com)
29 December 2006, 2:34 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=ChibiHalo1229060234131.html
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 31, 2006 11:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
I liked it, though you missed one indent. Though I would like to see more details.
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