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PostPosted: Fri Dec 22, 2006 3:14 pm    Post subject: This Is My House-Chapter 2 Reply with quote

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This Is My House-Chapter 2
Posted by Odin of SoS. (kavika86@yahoo.com)
16 December 2006, 2:14 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Odin_of_SoS.1216060214571.html
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2006 4:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Can't believe nobodies read this yet!

I've got a response for you, just wait a bit.

Really, come on people... Odin has been around longer than most of ya.
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2006 5:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

geez, I've gotten lazy.
I'll be on this as soon as I can, Odin. On my honor, this will get reviewed.
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 27, 2006 12:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Pretty darn good, Cold is right, why isn't everyone reading this!?

I have a crit though, you referred to 'ammo' in the narrative, I think abbreviations only belong in dialogue as I see no reason why a writer should abreviate as they have all the time in the world! Cool
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 5:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

well, ive been gone from a comp for the last week or so. definitely not the amount of responses i expected. but eh, ive been gone. thanks for checking though guys.
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 7:08 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Odin of SoS. wrote:
well, ive been gone from a comp for the last week or so. definitely not the amount of responses i expected. but eh, ive been gone. thanks for checking though guys.


Man I know how you feel, through my own story and my experiences in the 3D modelling community, do not spite people who have a lot of success, they have been around and have had their name established in the community through hard work and you can do the same, just hang in there and keep turning out top notch stuff, sooner rather than later you'll have your own contingent of loyal readers.
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