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PostPosted: Fri Nov 24, 2006 5:15 pm    Post subject: Commander: Change Reply with quote

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Commander: Change
Posted by Cthulhu117 (spartan_eric_271@yahoo.com)
23 November 2006, 2:17 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Cthulhu1171123061417481.html
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 24, 2006 8:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

And I'll say it again, great job. Writing the story more from Half-Jaw's point of view revitalizes the story, especially when you extend the storyline by describing events which the Arbiter didn't witness (e. g. the conversation between Half-Jaw and Truth, and the Brute's attack on Half-Jaw).

If only you could write faster. . . but look who's talking, since I haven't even finished the second chapter in my own fanfic after the better part of a year Wink
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 26, 2006 8:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Crikey that was good. Best thing I've read for a few days, I noticed some errors, mainly like 'dead' instead of 'deal' but I will definately go back and read the whole series. I like how you tied this into the game, it really makes the story more intriguing!
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 28, 2006 1:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Loved it! it was simply brilliant! i found it nice that you put the arbiter in the story line simply as a charactar that noone knows what he was thinking, i hope that maybe the next chapter will focus on what happend to him though.
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 28, 2006 6:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yay its finaly up. cant wait till the next one.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 01, 2006 2:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

STEEL RAIN wrote:
Yay its finaly up. cant wait till the next one.


Im not sure there is. The ending souded a bit conclusive and a prolouge for Dies Irae has just been posted.

What are you doing finishing the series here? No, wait what happened to Azathoth? Shed some light on this, please!
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 01, 2006 3:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

No worries...work on Commander is progressing, albeit slowly. I thought about ending it here, to be honest, and I thought about ending it at the end of Halo 2, but in the end I just fell back on my original plan: bring them through Halo 3.

For the moment, though, I'm a bit stuck, so you get Dies Irae this update instead.

By the way, HF2006, what did you think of Dies Irae? Probably better if you wait for this week's update and post a review on that chapter, though. So never mind.
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