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Long Time Gone Part 43
Posted by grylsy (grylsy@hotmail.com)
9 November 2006, 12:11 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=grylsy1109061211111.html

SYSTEM · Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 4:47 am Post subject:

Wow, 43 already, eh? I feel kinda old now, if y'know what I mean. Been a long time, hasn't it? Hell, I can't even remember the first episode. I suppose I wasn't around on HBO then.

I think I've got to start reading from the start, because I can't remember a thing about this! Well, guess I'm in for a long read.

- Dave.
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fallschirmjager · Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 11:13 am Post subject:

The start is absolutely terrible IMO and I'm ashamed of the knock off calls from BHD in my early writing days but I fully plan to go back over the story and rewrite it to how my final chapters come about.
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STEEL RAIN · Posted: Tue Nov 21, 2006 4:56 pm Post subject:

Theres nothing i can really comment on, keep up the good work, if you know whats good for you. Twisted Evil