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Dr Sky Tower
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Interesting... but I can't make head or tail of any of this! There are so many references to things that sound like they come from another game I was beginning to think they were super Sentinels or something  
I noticed the dashes at the beginning and end of every paragraph. This doesn't make much sense to me.
I've read a couple of these stories, and I think these characters are grossly overpowered - just about *nothing* can withstand their onslaught. At the rate they're going, this small clan of super-beings will soon annihilate the Forerunners, the UNSC and the Covenant... |
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You jump from writing style to writing style that it confuses me, use one and stick with it.
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| Dr Sky Tower wrote: | Interesting... but I can't make head or tail of any of this! There are so many references to things that sound like they come from another game I was beginning to think they were super Sentinels or something
I noticed the dashes at the beginning and end of every paragraph. This doesn't make much sense to me.
I've read a couple of these stories, and I think these characters are grossly overpowered - just about *nothing* can withstand their onslaught. At the rate they're going, this small clan of super-beings will soon annihilate the Forerunners, the UNSC and the Covenant... |
The dashes are there because that's how one of our writers submits their pieces, and I don't have the time to remove every single dash.
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