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PostPosted: Fri Oct 13, 2006 3:51 pm    Post subject: Macerr Chapter 29 Reply with quote

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Macerr Chapter 29
Posted by Xvash2, Godzilla2k4, Invaderrizz, Lord, Cocaine, Dan, Bennin (xvash2@sbcglobal.net)
13 October 2006, 5:12 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Xvash2,_Godz1013060512541.html
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 15, 2006 5:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Interesting... but I can't make head or tail of any of this! There are so many references to things that sound like they come from another game I was beginning to think they were super Sentinels or something Question Laughing

I noticed the dashes at the beginning and end of every paragraph. This doesn't make much sense to me.

I've read a couple of these stories, and I think these characters are grossly overpowered - just about *nothing* can withstand their onslaught. At the rate they're going, this small clan of super-beings will soon annihilate the Forerunners, the UNSC and the Covenant...
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 15, 2006 8:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You jump from writing style to writing style that it confuses me, use one and stick with it.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 3:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dr Sky Tower wrote:
Interesting... but I can't make head or tail of any of this! There are so many references to things that sound like they come from another game I was beginning to think they were super Sentinels or something Question Laughing

I noticed the dashes at the beginning and end of every paragraph. This doesn't make much sense to me.

I've read a couple of these stories, and I think these characters are grossly overpowered - just about *nothing* can withstand their onslaught. At the rate they're going, this small clan of super-beings will soon annihilate the Forerunners, the UNSC and the Covenant...


The dashes are there because that's how one of our writers submits their pieces, and I don't have the time to remove every single dash.
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