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PostPosted: Thu Oct 28, 2004 2:30 pm    Post subject: A Derelict Hell Reply with quote
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A Derelict Hell
Posted by Mind_Affecting_Parasite
26 October 2004, 10:58 PM

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=mind_affecti.1026042258501.html
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 28, 2004 9:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Could have flowed better.
Maybe could more solid, like a fetter.
Kinda an old theme, but it did okay.
Generally, this was fine. But, I'm not big on poems anyway.
(lame, huh?)
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