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PostPosted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 10:14 am    Post subject: Macerr Chapter 27 Reply with quote

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Macerr Chapter 27
Posted by Xvash2, Godzilla2k4, Invaderrizz, Lord, Cocaine, Dan, Bennin (xvash2@sbcglobal.net)
6 October 2006, 5:58 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Xvash2,_Godz1006060558291.html
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 2:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

It seems to me like your trying to go with that whole Stephen King, William Gibson present tense approach. You had it right for the most part but some parts were in past tense. This is really hard to pull off but you managed to make it work for the most part. And it is refreshing to see someone write like this. Good writing and all, 9/10.
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 10, 2006 6:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah. Not all of us write the same. I best relate my writing to LOST style, but the majority of this chapter is written by Godzilla2k4.
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