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PostPosted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 10:14 am    Post subject: ECHELON 5 Reply with quote

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ECHELON 5
Posted by Alex Mullins (SARGENTSCRUFY@gmail.com)
5 October 2006, 1:31 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Alex_Mullins1005060131161.html
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 12:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Violent and nasty, is this one... but excellently written!

I look forward to the next chapter!
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 6:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well I liked it but thats just me...man I have got to stop saying that.

Anyway um Its Seraph not serif

And dont they usually fire the missles so that the hit after the Mac takes the shields down... 'cause the missles dont do very much.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 4:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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As soon as I saw "Alfa Centaury", I skimmed through some, and didn't bother with the rest.

GPS errors like "whoa!!!" and caps on words were found in many places. You must read the Code before you submit to Fan Fiction.
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