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Whispers of the Fallen: Chapter 3- Deke and Me

 
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 10:13 am    Post subject: Whispers of the Fallen: Chapter 3- Deke and Me Reply with quote
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Whispers of the Fallen: Chapter 3- Deke and Me
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2 October 2006, 10:44 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Pwnocchio1002062244111.html
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 06, 2006 7:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
I read it. Review in a bit
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 07, 2006 11:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
This is a pretty good story! Smile

No problems with it that I can see, keep up the good work!
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 4:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Thanks for the comments! I will be submitting Chapter 4 shortly Smile
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 5:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Right, review.

Something is striking me. I feel like I know too little about whats going on. Yes, itis considered in good taste to not explain everything, but in this case, i just don't think I know enough backstory. Like seriously, why the hell do people want to kill Johnson so badly?

Other than that, loved it, just kinda lost.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 6:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Haha, it's cool- it's actually kind of meant to be that way. Don't worry, starting in Chapter 5, we get to see a few flashbacks that explain just what the heck have happened to both Johnson and the Master Chief in these past 3 months. Smile
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