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Tin Cans: They Stand Alone

 
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 29, 2006 12:29 pm    Post subject: Tin Cans: They Stand Alone Reply with quote
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Tin Cans: They Stand Alone
Posted by Andres (andres_vera2000@yahoo.com)
29 September 2006, 9:38 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Andres0929060938081.html
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 09, 2006 7:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
There were a few minor errors in your chapter; just fix your grammar and format. Overall, it was a good one.

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