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The Tear In Time: Prologue
Posted by (ENS) Rabid_Gallagher (rabid_masterchief@hotmail.com)
15 September 2006, 4:24 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=ENS_Rabid_Ga0915060424371.html

Mark Lieberg · Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2006 10:11 pm Post subject:

Nicee. Lookin foward to da nxt one.
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Hashey · Member Joined: 05 Oct 2004 Posts: 24

Nice, a mix of Halo, Star Trek and even Stargate Razz

Cassus Falco · Posted: Sun Sep 17, 2006 1:36 am Post subject:

Despite the fact I am not a fan of crossovers, it was handled well; throwing three completly different universes together is abit risky, but for your sake, I hope the gamble pays off.

Anyways, I have a few questions:

1. Is the ship O'Neill and Carter are aboard the Prometheus or one of those Tokra cargo ships?

2. Why did you choose the Enterprise-E?

(ENS) Rabid_Gallagher · Posted: Sun Sep 17, 2006 2:05 am Post subject:

For one, I like the look of the Enterprise-E. It's sleek, and I like sleek-e-ness. It has a sense of rebirth to it, since it was introduced in First Contact. I also want to use the hull seperation in a few chapters.

The ship that Mitchell and Cam are on is the Odyessy, not the Prometheus. That was destroyed in the Season Nine episode 'Ethon', which was the eagle that ate Prometheus' stomach and liver daily.

And, this is mass slashes, so suspect a few more Science fiction stuff to walk in here.
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grantix · Member Joined: 10 Nov 2005 Posts: 12

You need to use Military time.

1:29 PM = 13:29

1 AM = 01:00
2 AM = 02:00
3 AM = 03:00
4 AM = 04:00
5 AM = 05:00
6 AM = 06:00
7 AM = 07:00
8 AM = 08:00
9 AM = 09:00
10 AM = 10:00
11 AM = 11:00
12 PM = 12:00
1 PM = 13:00
2 PM = 14:00
3 PM = 15:00
4 PM = 16:00
5 PM = 17:00
6 PM = 18:00
7 PM = 19:00
8 PM = 20:00
9 PM = 21:00
10 PM = 22:00
11 PM = 23:00
12 AM = 00:00

Other than that, it was good. Very interesting.

Guardian · Posted: Sun Sep 17, 2006 5:24 pm Post subject:

Covenant weapons archaic?

(ENS) Rabid_Gallagher · Posted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 1:13 am Post subject:

Yes.
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Guardian · Posted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 2:43 am Post subject:

wierd, but then again just a small spread of quantum torpedoes being able to destroy a covenant capital ship. Isn't that pushing it a bit?

(ENS) Rabid_Gallagher · Posted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 3:57 am Post subject:

No, it wasn't just the torpedos. The combination of the MAC gun and the QTs were enough to destroy it. The archaic line is reference to their time-line. Did you just skim my story?
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Matthiasthe14th · Posted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 7:36 pm Post subject:

I love this type of story. Keep up on the series.

10/10

Arthur Wellesley · Member Joined: 30 Jun 2006 Posts: 306 Location: Canada

I'm liking the crossovers. It will finally answer the question, who would win? A Covenant Capital ship or the Enterprise, toe-to-toe.

Well written and well conceived. The dialogue seemed authentic for the most part and the descriptions were quite colorful. My favorite line, in fact, was the first: