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hboff Site Admin
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Hardballer Member

Joined: 07 Sep 2006 Posts: 24 Location: All over your ass
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Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2006 11:18 am Post subject: |
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Love it.
You're a great writer Dragonclaws, I can't wait to see what comes next. |
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Dr Sky Tower Member

Joined: 10 Jun 2006 Posts: 120 Location: Auckland, New Zealand
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Posted: Sun Sep 17, 2006 1:57 am Post subject: |
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Excellent story! Enjoyed this one.
Only one issue though: Johnson showing as Jahnson.
Other than that, all good!  |
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Dragonclaws Member

Joined: 10 Sep 2006 Posts: 4 Location: Washington State, USA
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Posted: Mon Sep 18, 2006 10:33 pm Post subject: |
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| Dr Sky Tower wrote: | Excellent story! Enjoyed this one.
Only one issue though: Johnson showing as Jahnson.
Other than that, all good!  |
That was intentional. It was from an Elite's perspective, and the name was spelled in his mind the way he thinks of it. In Halo: The Flood, an Elite refers to Captain Keyes as Ship Master Keezz. |
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