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Nick Kang
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Um...oh-kay there...I am now scared of you.
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Solidus Snake
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MC's Cousin
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I hope you ment to use improper grammar in your title.
As for the poem...well...umm...let's see....ah...
It did bring back memories of AotCR for me. Ah yes, running round a corner to discover a pack of Grunts that had run away in fear and were still wondering to do... so much fun.
Anyway, what the hell, I liked it.
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Michael Archer
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| Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 8:15 pm Post subject: Story |
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| Um..... You use a lot of swear words. A poet doesn't use swear words in every word in is sentence. |
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Mainevent
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But a Korn Poet does.  |
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Solidus Snake
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| Mainevent wrote: | | But a Korn Poet does. |
Lmao, that's right, a very anger depressed crazed KoRn Poet does. |
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Solidus Snake
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| OH and speaking of KoRn, this was also inspired by a song by KoRn, called Clown. I was listing to it and thinking of ways I can turn it into some kind of Halo song. |
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SYSTEM
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| Posted: Sat Oct 30, 2004 3:19 pm Post subject: Re: Story |
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| Michael Archer wrote: | | Um..... You use a lot of swear words. A poet doesn't use swear words in every word in is sentence. |
Mike, don't worry. It's Solidus. When he swears, it's usually for a very good reason. It's because Solidus has a way of making swear words fit in like a jiggsaw puzzle. It's a very unique writing style.
About the poem, I kinda like it. Brought back memories from Halo. Too bad I retired from Halo and Videogames about a month ago.
- Dave.
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MC's Cousin
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I hope you're planning on pulling yourself out of retirement for Halo 2 Dave.
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Solidus Snake
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| Posted: Sat Oct 30, 2004 3:43 pm Post subject: |
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| MC's Cousin wrote: | | I hope you're planning on pulling yourself out of retirement for Halo 2 Dave. |
You know he will. And thanks a lot Dave. |
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Solidus Snake
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And yeah I try not to cuss but it just happens, and a lot of it depends what kind of mood I'm in.
Stuff like for sad.
All the shit I take
Anger
Gotta feel so fucked
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Solidus Snake
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| I just wrote a new very long poem. Its gonna be depressing and its more like a Death poem. Its about dying and losing everything, but in the end it maybe better and peace that you can meet at the end. I'm about to submit it. |
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