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Sterfrye36
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I've only done two poems, and one of them was acceptable. The other wass kind of crappy. Nice rhymes. I found it chuckle-worthy. Good job.
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funkmon
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Nice little limmericks. Those got a grin out of me  |
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Conrad Lauf
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| Posted: Sat Aug 07, 2004 9:26 am Post subject: Update |
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| Thanks for the comments people, could i please have some more though because I've only got three. By the way, just thought I'd let you know, I'm a little girl who's barely a teenager and I know nothing about Halo, I only put a poem on here that was just good enough to get on, but bad enough so Icould see all the funny bad comments I got. I never expected to get all good comments!! |
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Covie_Lover
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This is cute! Too bad no one else is going to read this! Except possibly Halo Fan...atic, who seems to be stalking me...
It's a great poem...though it don't think Elites have shorts.... |
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Ark Night
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| I liked it!!! It was funny!!! |
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Phædrus
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I'm not stalking you.
*Slips back into shadows*
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Covie_Lover
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Sure you aren't....
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MC's Cousin
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Interesting. The could have flowed more; but I suppose this was meant to be kinda humorous more than a deep and touching poem. So, I'll give that to you for now.
Pretty good. But, actual stories are my forte; I'll let Chuck take care of this one.
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