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Tin Cans: Clog the gap

 
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 11, 2006 10:02 am    Post subject: Tin Cans: Clog the gap Reply with quote

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Tin Cans: Clog the gap
Posted by Andres (andres_vera2000@yahoo.com)
8 August 2006, 1:05 am

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Andres0808060105001.html
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 12, 2006 12:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good. It helps the professional look of your story to put a return between paragraphs, but since you obviously have a good grasp of Code, it isn't much of a problem. Well written, although it was made a little choppy by the constant shouting-out of what caliber they're using.

[rant at Nylund/Dietz]One of the reasons the Halo novels irritated me was that they always felt the need to tell us in nice big numbers what size bullet the Chief is using. Most people don't need or want to know. [/rant]

I would care to see this continued, all the same.
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