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Commander: Treachery
Posted by Cthulhu117 (spartan_eric_271@yahoo.com)
20 July 2006, 12:29 pm

http://halosn.bungie.org/fanfic/?story=Cthulhu1170720061229121.html

Azathoth · Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 5:16 pm Post subject:

Meep. I just belatedly spotted a few of my own typos.

I also just realized that unless Bungie want to use my plot for Halo 3, this was destined to be AU anyway.

Ummm....oops?

Eh, you guys probably don't care about that anyway.

Azathoth · Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 1:44 pm Post subject:

Thanks. It's nice to know that my series can still get a new fan to come out and say something about it. At times I feel like my story is stagnating, but then another one of you guys pops out of the woodwork and convinces me that it's worth it. Thanks to all you fans, Dagorath, HF2006 and STEEL RAIN most notably, but also Kodyack and pretty much everyone else who's commented on my stories at one time or another. <3 fans.

Halo Fanatic 2006 · Posted: Wed Jul 26, 2006 7:15 pm Post subject:

Wow, he mentioned my name, thank god somebody knows me by now. I've been a fan of this series since Sangheili (I did a lot of reading to catch up on the series that night) since I love writing and reading stories about the Covenant more than humans. Sorry I haven't been around lately, I've been busy.

mub · Member Joined: 26 Jul 2006 Posts: 3

I've read all your stories and I must say, they are really impressive. Some themes you carry on later in the stories instead of forgetting them and keep his personality traits right. It leads to a really good, in-depth character.

Good job!

STEEL RAIN · Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 6:13 am Post subject:

Question.why most notably us?

Im sure there are others, but who can turn down somthing like this.

Syotica · Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 6:39 am Post subject:

Interesting.

I don't have the time to do a review right now, but I have one thing to point out.

Azathoth · Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 12:50 pm Post subject:

STEEL RAIN, you three are on there because you've commented more regularly than anything else. Although I might have to include Syotica too if he keeps trying to make my stories better. Very Happy

Syotica: Yeah, I guess salute was a bad choice of words. Maybe "greeting" or "welcome" would have been better, because I wasn't trying to convey the whole traditional human "sir-yes-sir" salute. More like what the ancient Romans did. Or the Klingons. Razz

Syotica · Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 2:36 pm Post subject:

STEEL RAIN · Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 3:50 pm Post subject:

Steve have you read his earlyer fics?

I highly recomend them.

Syotica · Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 4:36 pm Post subject:

Azathoth · Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 6:17 pm Post subject:

Why, thank you. "Addicting" is everything I strive to be.

The Covies acting too human is the main problem in my writing. It's a bit annoying that I can't seem to get that right, because I prefer writing a Covenant POV.